My soul creeps, in wails of scattered leaves, violins howl in woeful sighs. Buried under a heap of bones and debris. Skin aching on skeleton traipse. Days pass over, hours tick on, in pale longing, my mind can only wonder, reminisce your smile. In weeping I frail, in the wind I diminish, a dry leaf blowing against the gale.
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Wow. This had a creepy yet sad feel about it! Really a good piece… 🙂
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Thank you! Yes it is a little sad and creepy! Lol something a little out there. Thanks for the follow too! I’ll head over and check your site out too!!
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It was my pleasure and thank you for visiting my page and following me back! Hope to keep seeing you in the future. 🙂
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I liked reading your posts! Look forward to reading more!
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Oh my, thank you! 😀
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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I like it and yes a bit creepy but cool!
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Hehe Lyn! Thank you. I do occasionally write dark poetry!
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cool
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stunning my poetess
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Thought you might like this one honey! Thank you!! 😘
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Love it!
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It seems to be getting mixed reviews! Lol ☺️
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Mixed reviews aka mixed ways of telling you how awesome you are sweetie! You keep on with your one of a kind self 😘💗💗xxx
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Thank you so much honey! I was feeling a little flat, you have made me smile! 😘😄
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That makes me happy- I know what that feels like. You are a precious jewel and I will remind you any time :))
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Awww can you get any sweeter? 🌸🍦🍭
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💗😘
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Gross! ; )
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Not a fan of this one William?
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“I prefer my bones covered with skin” he said with tongue in cheek. ; )
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That’s probably for the best too! Lol 😉☺️
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JENNIFER 😀
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Does that mean you like it? Haha ☺️
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It Means I Like You! 😀
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Oh thank you!!! 😄
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This is stunning Jen. Love it☺
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Oh yah!!! ☺️ thank you!!!!!
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😍
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‘My soul creeps …’ a poem with attitude & atmosphere! 🙂
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Thanks Deborah!! Stick around lots more atmosphere and attitude to come! Haha ☺️
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