Dusk falls,
The night air settles,
Below the setting stones,
Jasmine strums,
The golden strings of love,
With each pluck,
Tides clash,
Fireworks ignite,
Orchids and kiwi notes,
Drift across the summer’s night,
Lost in her tones,
Her red wine lips and honeysuckle kiss,
Nirvana slips,
A mirror reflects light,
Casting her face into the skies.
What an amazing piece to wake up to. Thankyou Jen. You made me smile☺
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Oh yah!! 😄 so glad!! Thank you!
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This an exceptional write. Love this write, Jennifer.
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Amitav, thank you!! 🙏🏻💕 I didn’t know where this one was going, but I love where it went!
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You are welcome. 🙂 Sometimes words just flow and you are amazed at the end result. That’s how it is in writing. 🙂
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YES! That’s spot on. Sometimes, with my novel manuscripts, when I read back over them, I think really; where did that come from? Did I write that? lol
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very beautiful Jennifer!
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When I started writing this one, I had no idea where it was going. But I love a good surprise! Lol Thanks Lyn!
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yes it was so nice!
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Thanks lovely!! 😘
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Jennifer your words and imagery are gold and rich. 🙂
Your lines of wisdom I like here:
“nirvana slips, a mirror reflects light, casting her face into the skies.
Such a surrealism image of humanities faces being reflected into skies and the beauty that captures with it. At least that’s what my interpretation is on your poem.
Love it. 🙂
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Oh thank you! That’s lovely! I like your interpretation, you are very intuitive! I couldn’t of explained it better myself!!
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You are so welcome. 🙂
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Thanks very much for the reblog! 😄
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beautiful and eloquent, Jennifer 👀 ♥ * ͜ * ♥ 👀
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Thank you so much George! 😄
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Perfect title to a beautiful poem 🙏❤️
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Nirvana bliss! And growing up one of my favourite bands! Thanks Ax!
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This is so so beautiful! I can see the scene. How wonderful! Jx
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Thank you Jodine! So happy you liked it! ❤️
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