Drip, Part 1

Wild honey,
Drip, down her candid heart,
Swelling,
Fainting; the sight of blood,
Paranoia, gapping like a fleshy wound,
A maiden of distrust,
In a dangerous peril of insanity,
Exposed to the heat of the sun,
Sanctuary within a dappled disparity,
Alice, disclosed,
Drip,
Her inner self,
Bleeding closed, on the outside,
Loathed,

Her battle just begun.

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20 thoughts on “Drip, Part 1

  1. My favorite lines:

    In a dangerous peril of insanity,
    Exposed to the heat of the sun,
    Sanctuary within a dappled disparity,

    The structure and storytelling poetic prose you’ve jolted down here –
    has a massive vision.

    I can’t wait to read part 2. On my way now. 🙂

    Like

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